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When the world around me comes falling down,
When the sorrow surrounds me all around,
When the pain inflicted is too much to bear,
I know I still have you.

When I’m stabbed through the gut,
When the world rips me apart,
When everything around me is torn asunder,
I know I still have you.

When my life beings to fade to darkness,
I know you still love me.
When my soul begins to drift away from my body,
I know you still love me.
When my body is torn to pieces by my own inner demons,
I know you still love me.

When everything fails and all hope seems to vanish,
I know you will bring me hope.
When I am claimed by the reaper,
I know you will still love me.
When I am dragged to deepest layer of hell
I know you will fly on angel’s wings to bring me back

When I am plunged into a never ending pit of despair,
When the walls close in on me,
When the dark tunnel seems to be endless,
I know you will banish the pain
Until your love is all that remains
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Author's Comments

So this is my first real attempt at those kinda poems that don't have any consistent rhythm and meter and rhyme scheme. Its one of those ones where you stand on stage and read it, but it sounds like a conversation but when read properly soundsl ike a poem. Yeah I make no sense. Its a little sucky...no a lot sucky. But yeah.

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i think it's really good

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